jonathan yang
positive  - i like the instruments
constructive  - transitions could be smoother, form is also off
positive - it sounds cool

wilson

positive - i like the instruments used

constructive - maybe work on transitions to make them blend them in a bit smoother

positive - sounds really cool

luis

positive - really good transitions 

constructive - bit repetitive at times

positive - good instruments used and they blend well

Alex T

positive - nice intro

constructive - transition work and maybe using different instruments 

positive - sounds cool

kenny

positive - sounds interesting

constructive - a bit repetitive at times 

positive - good instrument choice they all seem to fit together 

shawn tran

positive - nice rhythm in intro

constructive - volume control some things seem too loud, transition

positive - sounds really good

yvone

positive - use of volume control and motive

constructive - maybe change up the instruments for a more interesting sound

positive - sounds pretty good

positive - 

constructive - 

positive - 

jonathan
positive - song has a really nice intro
constructive - work on transitions, they're good but don't really blend
positive - has a really nice sound, pretty cool

joanne
positive - i like the instruments used
constructive - add more beats to make it sound more interesting
positive - simple but good

mat
positive - i like the instruments used
constructive - work on transitions
positive - interesting sound

maria
positive - has a nice sound
constructive - the instruments don't exactly blend together well in some parts, work on transitions
positive - overall not bad

wilson
positive -
constructive -
positive -

Huan Ming

positive  - nice use of instruments

constructive  - maybe the use of different instruments, a bit repetitive at times

positive - sounds good, really simple

Alonzo

positive - has a mysterious sound

constructive - work on transition, blank spots

positive - sounds interesting 

Oscar

positive - i like the way the song starts

constructive - the song doesn't seem to always blend and needs work on transitions, also theres parts where the song seems like it ends but keeps going with a different sound

positive - it seems really ambitious and has a lot going on 

Adon

positive - has a simple sound

constructive - volume control

positive - i like the instruments used 

Taryn

positive - i like the instruments used

constructive - the motive became a bit repetitive 

positive - almost has a somewhat mysterious sound

Mario

positive - has an interesting sound

constructive - ease into things, intro was a little too much

positive - overall not too bad 

Alex

positive - nice use of volume control

constructive - maybe the use of different instruments would make it a little more interesting

positive - simple but good

Linda
positive - it sounds cool
constructive - a little work on the volumes
positive -  i like the ending

Jacky
positive - sounds good
constructive - work on transitions
positive - i like the motive

chak
positive - i like the A section
constructive  - use different instruments
positive - has a very interesting sound

jonatan
positive- opening sounds cool
constructive - transitions could be smoother
positive - sounds really good

Luis C
positive - i like the instruments used
constructive - didn't always seems to blend together
positive - it is interesting

kyle
positive - i like the intro
constructive - maybe lower the volume down a bit
positive - has a really good sound and good instruments used

who: huan ming

positive - it sounds good/interesting
constructive - maybe change the ending
positive - put together nicely

Who: Linda

Positive - i like speed of it
constructive - maybe change the motive a bit
positive - B section sounds pretty good, did a good job at putting it together

who: garageband
what: electronic
when: today
where: in class
why: because collins asked him to

A section: 3 instruments
B section: 2 instruments
what is added in B section: bass, drums
what is removed in B section: strings