Huan Ming

positive  - nice use of instruments

constructive  - maybe the use of different instruments, a bit repetitive at times

positive - sounds good, really simple

Alonzo

positive - has a mysterious sound

constructive - work on transition, blank spots

positive - sounds interesting 

Oscar

positive - i like the way the song starts

constructive - the song doesn't seem to always blend and needs work on transitions, also theres parts where the song seems like it ends but keeps going with a different sound

positive - it seems really ambitious and has a lot going on 

Adon

positive - has a simple sound

constructive - volume control

positive - i like the instruments used 

Taryn

positive - i like the instruments used

constructive - the motive became a bit repetitive 

positive - almost has a somewhat mysterious sound

Mario

positive - has an interesting sound

constructive - ease into things, intro was a little too much

positive - overall not too bad 

Alex

positive - nice use of volume control

constructive - maybe the use of different instruments would make it a little more interesting

positive - simple but good

Linda
positive - it sounds cool
constructive - a little work on the volumes
positive -  i like the ending

Jacky
positive - sounds good
constructive - work on transitions
positive - i like the motive

chak
positive - i like the A section
constructive  - use different instruments
positive - has a very interesting sound

jonatan
positive- opening sounds cool
constructive - transitions could be smoother
positive - sounds really good

Luis C
positive - i like the instruments used
constructive - didn't always seems to blend together
positive - it is interesting

kyle
positive - i like the intro
constructive - maybe lower the volume down a bit
positive - has a really good sound and good instruments used

who: huan ming

positive - it sounds good/interesting
constructive - maybe change the ending
positive - put together nicely

Who: Linda

Positive - i like speed of it
constructive - maybe change the motive a bit
positive - B section sounds pretty good, did a good job at putting it together

who: garageband
what: electronic
when: today
where: in class
why: because collins asked him to

A section: 3 instruments
B section: 2 instruments
what is added in B section: bass, drums
what is removed in B section: strings

who: upright bass, drums, vocals, saxophone, PIANO
what: blues
where: USA
when: 1960s, 1956
why: he is putting a spell on someone because he loves them, CATCH A GIRL
form: Intro, ABA

who: electric guitar, vocals, bass, drums, synth, background vocals, LAPTOP,
what: Pop, MASHUP
when: 2013
where:USA, CLEVELAND OHIO
why: its a mix of two songs, EXPERIMENT WITH TWO TRACKS.
THIS IS LEGAL BECAUSE AS LONG AS HE CREDITS THE ARTIST HE SHOULDNT BE BREAKING ANY COPYRIGHT LAWS

who: vocals, busta rhymes, DJ
what: hip hop
when: 2000s, 1998
where:USA
why: he likes to rap, PSYCHO