wilson

positive - i like the instruments used

constructive - maybe work on transitions to make them blend them in a bit smoother

positive - sounds really cool

luis

positive - really good transitions 

constructive - bit repetitive at times

positive - good instruments used and they blend well

Alex T

positive - nice intro

constructive - transition work and maybe using different instruments 

positive - sounds cool

kenny

positive - sounds interesting

constructive - a bit repetitive at times 

positive - good instrument choice they all seem to fit together 

shawn tran

positive - nice rhythm in intro

constructive - volume control some things seem too loud, transition

positive - sounds really good

yvone

positive - use of volume control and motive

constructive - maybe change up the instruments for a more interesting sound

positive - sounds pretty good

positive - 

constructive - 

positive -