positive - nice use of instruments
constructive - maybe the use of different instruments, a bit repetitive at times
positive - sounds good, really simple
Alonzo
positive - has a mysterious sound
constructive - work on transition, blank spots
positive - sounds interesting
Oscar
positive - i like the way the song starts
constructive - the song doesn't seem to always blend and needs work on transitions, also theres parts where the song seems like it ends but keeps going with a different sound
positive - it seems really ambitious and has a lot going on
Adon
positive - has a simple sound
constructive - volume control
positive - i like the instruments used
Taryn
positive - i like the instruments used
constructive - the motive became a bit repetitive
positive - almost has a somewhat mysterious sound
Mario
positive - has an interesting sound
constructive - ease into things, intro was a little too much
positive - overall not too bad
Alex
positive - nice use of volume control
constructive - maybe the use of different instruments would make it a little more interesting
positive - simple but good
