Huan Ming

positive  - nice use of instruments

constructive  - maybe the use of different instruments, a bit repetitive at times

positive - sounds good, really simple

Alonzo

positive - has a mysterious sound

constructive - work on transition, blank spots

positive - sounds interesting 

Oscar

positive - i like the way the song starts

constructive - the song doesn't seem to always blend and needs work on transitions, also theres parts where the song seems like it ends but keeps going with a different sound

positive - it seems really ambitious and has a lot going on 

Adon

positive - has a simple sound

constructive - volume control

positive - i like the instruments used 

Taryn

positive - i like the instruments used

constructive - the motive became a bit repetitive 

positive - almost has a somewhat mysterious sound

Mario

positive - has an interesting sound

constructive - ease into things, intro was a little too much

positive - overall not too bad 

Alex

positive - nice use of volume control

constructive - maybe the use of different instruments would make it a little more interesting

positive - simple but good