Linda
positive - it sounds cool
constructive - a little work on the volumes
positive -  i like the ending

Jacky
positive - sounds good
constructive - work on transitions
positive - i like the motive

chak
positive - i like the A section
constructive  - use different instruments
positive - has a very interesting sound

jonatan
positive- opening sounds cool
constructive - transitions could be smoother
positive - sounds really good

Luis C
positive - i like the instruments used
constructive - didn't always seems to blend together
positive - it is interesting

kyle
positive - i like the intro
constructive - maybe lower the volume down a bit
positive - has a really good sound and good instruments used